Your opinion on the introduction of my story?? Come on, you know you want to answer...?

Your right I do want to answer. I love this. Which I don't say much here. Your detail is so beautiful, I can picture it in my head. I know everyone says "OMG the was amazing!" but I mean it. My favorite part is when you describe the darkness. That is something I totally see a villain doing. Keep writing, I'd love to read more. Thanks for sharing this and good luck!